I plan on working this comic over the next coming days. I am still fixing my writing on the chapters so I hope to release it soon.
Final image where I pushed the shadows and lights further.
Sketch
Laid in the lineart and blocked the key areas. I used Clip Studio's lace brush and colored it the veil with blue to get that mood right. I separated the layers for the sword blade, the hands, Roan (girl on left), Miki (girl on right) and the veil.
Added the sword guard last and fixed a few more things on the lineart
Went for colors. I wanted to try a soft look overall
The theme is supposed to be subtly scary so I placed blue for shadows and textured to get that eerie feel
Made it darker to increase contrast and fixed the texture on the sword blade. Also added gold accents on the veil.